A Challenge!
As I earlier brought up to wilde_thought, and as some of you may already know, there was quite an interesting story submitted as a comment a few weeks ago that has since gone unfinished. I would absolutly LOVE to hear the intended ending, but in lieu of that, I would be equally pleased to hear some submissions from others. It can be as romantic or raunchy as you like. Whether or not you have any previous writing skills, I'd love to hear what you may come up with. Just put yourself right in the story and write away! Heres a refresher, for those who've missed it:
At 12:23 AM, Anonymous said…
L went to bed and, before she knew it, she was in Morpheus's land...
She began dreaming, and somehow appeared in a green, lush garden. She was laying on the grass, wearing a summer dress, on top of a blanket. A slight breeze carried the perfume from the flowers that were all around her. Soft bird chirps could be heard in the distance. She breathed deeply and thought "what a beautiful place... how can it get any better?".
She stretched as the gentle sun rays caressed her skin, and closed her eyes. "This is so nice..." she thought.
The wind began blowing a bit stronger, and her dress rose against her hips. The breeze caressed and kissed her thighs and tummy. "Oops", she thought. "I thought I was wearing underwear. Well, it doesn't matter, nobody else is here". The smell also became a bit stronger, but it was still very pleasant...
She rolled over and let the wind caress her back. Her dress was now up to her waist, but she didn't care. She felt free, happy, without a worry in the world. All of a sudden, a few raindrops fell against her back. The smell became just a tad stronger, but it was still sweet... like jasmine.
The breeze was caressing her back, sending shivers down her spine. She felt goosebumps, but it was a pleasant sensation. The raindrops felt warm against her skin, and began traveling down her back. She felt them making a little pool at the small of her back, and the smell of jasmine surrounded her.
All of a sudden, she felt a gentle touch, like of a feather being rubbed down her back, She knew she was alone, and wondered where that came from. The touch was so nice and gentle that soon she didn't mind... the touch became that of warm, loving hands. Those hands began travelling all over her back, from her shoulders to her lower back, rubbing the rain against her. She moaned slightly as she felt her muscles relax, and the goose bumps come back.
A voice was heard near her... "You are so beautiful and sexy... and I love you so". The voice sounded familiar yet a bit distant. The hands never stopped rubbing her back, her sides, the back of her neck, the top of her buttocks... the warmth from the raindrops spread all over her back and she felt content. She felt a kiss on the back of her neck, and she opened her eyes slightly.
Out of nowhere, a bedroom side table appeared, with a warm bottle of jasmine oil on top of it. The kisses on her back continued. She was being kissed everywhere: the back of her head, her shoulders, her neck, her sides, the back of her legs... she felt loved. The voice spoke again... "I love you, L". She woke up to find herself laying on her tummy, hot jasmine oil on her back, candles around the room, and soft music playing. D's was laying next to her, with a happy smile and a loving gaze. "Did you enjoy your surprise?" he whispered. "I sure did", K whispered back. The jasmine smell was intoxicating and she felt happy and relaxed.
D kissed her passionately and said "I need to kiss every inch of your body, I cannot resist it". K giggled and stretched once more, as D began kissing her mouth, her chin, her neck, and began moving lower...
Lets hear what you've got, loves!
xoxo
5 Comments:
Thank you for your submission, Alex! I'm so glad someone accepted my challenge! ;0) Very well done. I'd still love to see more though, if anyone else thinks they are up to it!
xoxo
We're working on our prose now, Good Wife.
Glad to hear it, wilde_thought! I am sure I won't be disappointed!
xoxo
Hi, I'm the original poster of the story. I'm still posting as anon because I don't have a Blogger account (yet :)
I meant to write the second part a day or two later, but unfortunately I've been too busy with work and other things. I have visited a few times, and I see your fingers have been busy as well...
Before starting the second part, I was going to ask you where D's wandering tongue is allowed to go, but a post of yours about anal sex clarified all doors are open for exploration... this is good :)
Still on that subject, there is a book on Amazon that may interest you. It explains that the anus is the body part in a woman with the most nerve endings after the clitoris. A warm and wandering tongue around those areas can certainly do miracles... It's perfectly safe sex provided one is clean beforehand, and it's an experience I recommend if you haven't tried it yet. Tristan (the author of the book, who is female) also has a couple of videos about the subject. They're quite good as well.
http://www.amazon.com/exec/obidos/tg/detail/-/1573440280/104-6937136-9245528
I'll keep an eye on your blog and will write again soon. These fingers and tongue (and other body parts) can't stay still for long!
Yours,
D
I look foward to hearing the intended conclusion, D! You've left us wondering! ;0) Thank you.
And I'd still love to hear everybody elses versions as well! Lets hear what you've got!
*eagerly anticipating*
xoxo
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